Final Outcome of OITNB Titles and Crit

I was very pleased with my finished piece. I had some trouble exporting the video with a good enough quality but was able to do this with help from a friend.

Feedback from the project hinted to the idea that perhaps the bars coming across the screen were simple enough to be used as they are.
Not much was brought up about the very seperate films me and Qandeel worked on but I felt critical of myself to work more together next time I pair up with someone.
There was an agreement with the idea to work on something simple for the title sequence and although I cut down my ideas from another complex storyboard, perhaps simplifying it even more would be even better.
All in all, I feel like this project, although was the hardest so far, had produced the best outcome.